I didn't notice the "um"s at all, so no worries there - I thought you did a great job, esp since it was on the fly!
Great vid, your collection looks great, and I'm super envious of what looks to be a mint DDS deluxe box. I'm also thinking of rehousing my boxed games (GBAs and LE PSP games that come bundled in boxes with soundtracks, etc.), but not sure if I have the space to hold them twice over...
I also have weird impressions of what people might look like, but since your's is the MGS fox, I guess I wasn't sure what to expect?